Wednesday, June 6, 2012

Famous Chinese Tradition Food --- Fried Dumpling


This's not a big problem for me to cook because i like cooking so much:)!!!
Lots of pictures, i make them in order to one picture.

The first thing is to prepare the flour put some water and yeast and let the flour stand for couple of hours.

The second thing is mixed the grand meat 3 eggs and some scallion and some seasoning, such as salt, sugar, soy sauce together.

Then the flour is ready. Cut a part and twist then cut small square and use the stick to make a circle piece.

Put the filling into the circle flour and stick edge together.

Fill the pan with some olive oil and put the dumpling into pan when their boiled and put in some water. After all of the water evaporate and the bottom turn to golden color that means done.

Now enjoy the delicious fried dumpling!!!
(I am really like to eat this in my country, and i can't find it in American even in china town. That's why i decided to try to do it myself!!! So delicious:)!!!)

Blog 19: Class Reflection

B. Next, consider your online experience this semester and write a second paragraph that answers the following questions:
Was writing online different from other writing experiences you have had in the past? If yes, how so? If not, what was the same?
Did writing blog entries help improve your writing ability? Please explain why or why not.
Did you feel that the online work was a shared experience or an individual activity?
Did you read other students’ online work? (Never/ Only when Assigned/ Sometimes/ Often)
Did you get the impression that other members of the class or the network read your blog? (Never/ Only when Assigned/ Sometimes/ Often)


C. Finally, consider your overall experience in the class and write a third paragraph that answers the following:
What lessons will you be taking away from this class?
Is there something you would have liked to discuss that we did not get to? What is it and why did you want to discuss it? (Or, what did we not cover in depth that you would have liked to cover in depth and why?)
Do you feel that you are leaving this class with a basic understanding of writing strategies? Why or why not?
What was the most memorable moment, assignment, interaction, or experience you had in the class? Please explain why.
What recommendation(s) would you give to a student that plans to take this class next semester?

      Go back through my blog entries for the semester and i choose three blogs as my best work, there are blog 5, blog 9 and blog 13. Blog 5 is my first blog that the professor taught us how to write about the body of the essay i learnt we should write something from the article and also we need write something connected to myself. I took time to figure out how to connected to myself and also that is my first try to write it. Blog 9 is the one i think that is not difficult topic to write because it is very close our lifestyle and easy to find example and experience from myself. Blog 13 is the one we saw the media about what kind of water we drink everyday and what is the difference. It is a very interesting one because i want to find what and how i drink everyday. It has a very big difference.
      I never have write online experience in the previous class, But i think it is helps me, because i can look at other classmates work. sometime when you don't know how to write it. Others thoughts will help you to brain storm. That's why i think it is good.

Thursday, May 17, 2012

Blog 18: The Story of Stuff

2. Planned Obsolescence/Perceived Obsolescence
Define "planned obsolescence" and "perceived obsolescence" in your own words. Who/What is responsible for these marketing strategies? Who/What benefits from them? Who/What suffers because of them? Are these strategies necessary? Are they right? Provide evidence from your own experience or from what you have read and discussed in class.

           In my opinion, "planned obsolescence" means the industrial design have a policy of planning or design a product with a limited useful life, therefor it will become as trash and can't use it anymore. "perceived obsolescence" means in some way in our mind, we think it is unfashionable or no longer functional after a certain period of time and It is human nature to get attracted to new inventions and new objects. 
           Industrialists and businessmen knows that this human nature to their advantage and release old products with small changes.  They claim the modified products to have new qualities and features when they are released in the market. 
           Industrialists and businessmen get profits with the modified products.  Because people discard their old products to buy the new mobile phones or cameras that have special and unique features.  They discard their clothes, bags that they were using till now to buy new fashion products.  This not only leads to money wastage but also is harmful for the environment as waster materials increase.
           Nowadays, the technology is always change their versions very quick, especially in the software industry. That's why you have to follow their step to buy the new stuff just because they have tiny change and you can't use the old version anymore. As for me, i have an apple iPod, you can't use it over 2 years because it has limit battery life. The mac also change the version very quick like once a year. For an industry, planned obsolescence stimulates demand by encouraging purchasers to buy sooner if they still want a functioning product.
           It is not a good idea to discard the objects that are being used unless it is necessary.  If anybody is not using the objects it is better to give it to somebody who will use them.


Monday, May 7, 2012

Blog 14

  1. Read/Annotate the advice in “Happy Meals” on page 33 of the packet.
  2. Blog 14: Write a 250+ word blog entry where 
  • one paragraph addresses all the ideas in Pollan's advice that are possible for you or your family to do and why, 
  • another paragraph addresses all the ideas in Pollan's advice that would be hard for you or your family to do and why, and 
  • one last paragraph addresses all the ideas in Pollan's advice that are impossible for you or your family to do right now and why.
In "Happy Meals" Pollan's advice that we possible can "Eat mostly plants, especially leaves." I believe most of us would agree with this statement because when he said "By eating a plant - based diet, you'll be consuming far fewer calories, since plant foods are typically less 'energy dense' than the other things you might eat." That's true. 
We and our family can really easy to find the plants to eat,especially leaves, such as, lettuce, spinach,celery and so on. They are all very healthy food. However, i think having a healthy eating habit it comes from the lifestyle of each of us. One of the big problems is very difficult to eat those healthy plants is that today we are having really busy lifestyle that we don't have enough time to prepare our food and we always go out to eat. If you go out to eat or grab some food to go that you can't find the "green vegetable" like this healthy. You always eat unhealthy food with high calories. Another reason is we always eat alone. If we always eat alone and you won't to take long time to just prepare the food for yourself. Otherwise, you stay with your whole family and you will.
Pollan's advice are possible to do and again i agree with it. The thing is how much time i am going to put on my meal and how much i care about myself's body. I will put the time to organize what i eat now. How healthy i could be. I will follow his advice to eat mostly plants, especially leaves.

Tuesday, May 1, 2012

Blog 13

  1. Compose a multi-paragraph 250+ word blog entry on ONE myth about water consumption by doing the following:
  • Quote the myth
  • In your own words, restate the most convincing arguments against this myth. 
  • Connect at least one of the arguments to your personal experience with an example.
  • Explain what YOU may be able to do to help debunk this myth further.
         According to the passage "The story of the bottled water", The Myth is Bottled water is convenient. The reality is we can find free drinking water anywhere, such as, school, park, office and even when you home.  Disposal of plastics is not easy and inconvenient. More convenient is you buy a reusable bottle and filling it from the public sources instead of buying bottled water. The leading organizations suggest to use a stainless steel or lined aluminum as sturdiest and safest.
        When the Myth think: "Bottled water is continent." I am not so sure that myth is correct. It could be also that We can find the drinking water anywhere in the public. or you don't have to pay and you can drink whatever you want.
        From my experience, I have the same experience many times. I think the public water is much convenient than the bottled water. When i in school i always bring my own bottle to refill the water from the school tap. It is very convenient for me because i have many class during the day and i really like to drink the water. I don't have too much time to go out to by the bottled water between class to class. I have to find the class because they are not pretty close sometimes and also i need to use the bathroom during the class. For me the running water from the tap everywhere in school are very convenient for me even i don't have time to refill it but also i can drink it. Therefore, I find the myth think "bottled water is convenient" that hard to believe because my own experience.
        Starting from myself, i will drinking tap water instead of bottle water and then, i will tell my friends and my family that doesn't have different and the tap water is healthy and more "green" than the bottle water.

Thursday, April 26, 2012

XXXL: Why are we so fat?

The Fattening of America
Eric Finkelstein is a health economist at a research institute in North Carolina. In “The Fattening of America” (Wiley; $26.95), written with Laurie Zuckerman, he argues that Americans started to put on pounds in the eighties because it made financial sense for them to do so. Relative to other goods and services, food has got cheaper in the past few decades, and fattening foods, in particular, have become a bargain. Between 1983 and 2005, the real cost of fats and oils declined by sixteen per cent. During the same period, the real cost of soft drinks dropped by more than twenty per cent.

“For most people, an ice cold Coca-Cola used to be a treat reserved for special occasions,” Finkelstein observes. Today, soft drinks account for about seven per cent of all the calories ingested in the United States, making them “the number one food consumed in the American diet.” If, instead of sweetened beverages, the average American drank water, Finkelstein calculates, he or she would weigh fifteen pounds less.

The correlation between cost and consumption is pretty compelling; as Finkelstein notes, there’s no more basic tenet of economics than that price matters. But, like evolution, economics alone doesn’t seem adequate to the obesity problem. If it’s cheap to consume too many calories’ worth of ice cream or Coca-Cola, it’s even cheaper to consume fewer.

The End of Overeating
In “The End of Overeating” (Rodale; $25.95), David A. Kessler, a former commissioner of the Food and Drug Administration, takes a somewhat darker view of the situation. It’s not that sweet and oily foods have become less expensive; it’s that they’ve been reëngineered while we weren’t looking. Kessler spends a lot of time meeting with (often anonymous) consultants who describe how they are trying to fashion products that offer what’s become known in the food industry as “eatertainment.” Fat, sugar, and salt turn out to be the crucial elements in this quest: different “eatertaining” items mix these ingredients in different but invariably highly caloric combinations. A food scientist for Frito-Lay relates how the company is seeking to create “a lot of fun in your mouth” with products like Nacho Cheese Doritos, which meld “three different cheese notes” with lots of salt and oil. Another product-development expert talks about how she is trying to “unlock the code of craveability,” and a third about the effort to “cram as much hedonics as you can in one dish.”

Kessler invents his own term—“conditioned hypereating”—to describe how people respond to these laboratory-designed concoctions. Foods like Cinnabons and Starbucks’ Strawberries & Crème Frappuccinos are, he maintains, like drugs: “Conditioned hypereating works the same way as other ‘stimulus response’ disorders in which reward is involved, such as compulsive gambling and substance abuse.” For Kessler, the analogy is not merely rhetorical: research on rats, he maintains, proves that the animals’ brains react to sweet, fatty foods the same way that addicts’ respond to cocaine. A reformed overeater himself—“I have owned suits in every size,” he writes—Kessler advises his readers to eschew dieting in favor of a program that he calls Food Rehab. The principles of Food Rehab owe a lot to those of drug rehab, except that it is not, as Kessler acknowledges, advisable to swear off eating altogether. “The substitute for rewarding food is often other rewarding food,” he writes, though what could compensate for the loss of Nacho Cheese Doritos he never really explains.


Fat Land
In the early nineteen-sixties, a mannamed David Wallerstein was running a chain of movie theatres in the Midwest and wondering how to boost popcorn sales. Wallerstein had already tried matinée pricing and two-for-one specials, but to no avail. According to Greg Critser, the author of “Fat Land” (2003), one night the answer came to him: jumbo-sized boxes. Once Wallerstein introduced the bigger boxes, popcorn sales at his theatres soared, and so did those of another high-margin item, soda.

A decade later, Wallerstein had retired from the movie business and was serving on McDonald’s board of directors when the chain confronted a similar problem. Customers were purchasing a burger and perhaps a soft drink or a bag of fries, and then leaving. How could they be persuaded to buy more? Wallerstein’s suggestion—a bigger bag of fries—was greeted skeptically by the company’s founder, Ray Kroc. Kroc pointed out that if people wanted more fries they could always order a second bag.

“But Ray,” Wallerstein is reputed to have said, “they don’t want to eat two bags—they don’t want to look like a glutton.” Eventually, Kroc let himself be convinced; the rest, as they say, is supersizing.

Mindless Eating
The elasticity of the human appetite is the subject of Brian Wansink’s “Mindless Eating” (2006). Wansink is the director of Cornell University’s Food and Brand Lab, and he has performed all sorts of experiments to test how much people will eat under varying circumstances. These have convinced him that people are—to put it politely—rather dim. They have no idea how much they want to eat or, once they have eaten, how much they’ve consumed. Instead, they rely on external cues, like portion size, to tell them when to stop. The result is that as French-fry bags get bigger, so, too, do French-fry eaters.

Consider the movie-matinée experiment. Some years ago, Wansink and his graduate students handed out buckets of popcorn to Saturday-afternoon filmgoers in Chicago. The popcorn had been prepared almost a week earlier, and then allowed to become hopelessly, squeakily stale. Some patrons got medium-sized buckets of stale popcorn and some got large ones. (A few, forgetting that the snack had been free, demanded their money back.) After the film, Wansink weighed the remaining kernels. He found that people who’d been given bigger buckets had eaten, on average, fifty-three per cent more.

In another experiment, Wansink invited participants to cook dinner for themselves with ingredients that he provided. One group got big boxes of pasta and big bottles of sauce, a second smaller boxes and smaller bottles. The first group prepared twenty-three per cent more, and downed it all. In yet another experiment, Wansink rigged up bowls that could be refilled, via a hidden tube. When he served soup out of the trick bowls, people, he writes, “ate and ate and ate.” On average, they consumed seventy-three per cent more than those who were served from regular bowls. “Give them a lot and they eat a lot,” he writes.

Before McDonald’s discovered the power of re-portioning, it offered just a small bag of French fries, which contained two hundred calories. Today, a small order of fries has two hundred and thirty calories, and a large order five hundred. (Add fifteen calories for each package of ketchup.) Similarly, a McDonald’s soda used to be eight ounces. Today, a small soda is sixteen ounces (a hundred and fifty calories), and a large soda is thirty-two ounces (three hundred calories). Perhaps owing to the influence of fast-food culture, up-sizing has by now spread to all sorts of other venues. In a 2002 study, Marion Nestle, a nutrition professor at New York University, and Lisa Young, an adjunct there, examined the offerings, past and present, at American supermarkets. They found that during the nineteen-eighties the amount of food that was counted as a single serving increased rapidly. A similar jump showed up in cookbooks; when the researchers compared dessert recipes in old and new editions of volumes like “The Joy of Cooking,” they discovered that, even in cases where the recipes themselves had remained unchanged, the predicted number of servings had shrunk. According to the federally supported National Heart, Lung, and Blood Institute, the bagels that Americans eat have in the past twenty years swelled from a hundred and forty to three hundred and fifty calories each. If, as Wansink argues, people are relying on external cues to determine their consumption, then the new, bigger bagel is sneaking in an additional two hundred and ten calories. For someone who is in the habit of eating a bagel a day, these extra calories translate into a weight gain of more than a pound a month.

Tuesday, April 24, 2012

Blog 11

PART I The Meatrix 
Moopheus find leo and want to show him what is the real farm. The place that leo stay is a fantasy family farm. Moospheus give leo two choice that blue pill is stay in the fantasy farm or choice the red pill will show you the truth. leo choose the red pill to see the truth. They go through a crazy transition. They are landing in a horrible place that is a factory farm. In the mid 20th century,greed agriculture corporation want to get the greatest profits that the factory farming born. Animal are living in the very worse environment. They are packed togethday, no sunlight, no fresh air and even can't turn around that make animals are sick. The corporate machine began to add antibiotics to their feed to keep them alive. The factory farming corporating


The Meatrix: Revolting 
The second video shows that in order to increase the production of milk they use hormones.Also the calves are separated from their mothers. They produce a fake milk with cows blood to feed the calves. producing the mad cow disease.The cows tails are cut in an unsafe method.




The Meatrix II 1/2

  • The third video agent shows how the meat is processed daily they made a lot amount of products,however,the unhealthy conditions that the meat is made is not the agents priority.the profit is the agents number one priority. 







  • PART II
     I think the biggest issue is that factory farming has affected the family farms the most because they but them out of business without offering them any alternative.Also,it impacts the future of the agriculture as this family farms begin to disappear.We live in a country that the population is over 300 million of people.Forcing the food industry to grow in order to feed all these people.This subject has been a big country for all of us, especially for those who knows the negatives results of Factory Farming. One of the biggest problems is that many family farms are disappearing because of the competition.Therefore farms struggle to stay in business.In fact, the old generation of farmers are not being replace by the newest one. Not only that, factory farming has damage the environment,food, animals ,etc.

    I think that the government should take action by helping family farms to grow. It is important for the family farms produce fresh, nutritious,foods, small family farms provide a wealth of help for their local regions and communities.According to the article "family farmers benefit society by boosting democratic values in their communities through active civic participation"  by doing this act it will open new jobs,even more young people will be encouraged to become farmers. At the same time it will diffidently secure the preservation of green space within the community.


    Monday, April 23, 2012

    Blog 10

    In "Imitation of Film: Here's Smoking at You, Kid." Nicholas Balakar states that children in their adolescents like to smoke if they saw actors smoke in the , a nationwide survey published in the November issue of Pediatrics reports. The researchers also said thirty-eight percent of children who begin to smoke is from what they have seen in the movie. The Dr. James D. Sargent, who is the lead author on the study and a professor of pediatrics at Dartmouth Medical School, he said "the R- rated movies have much smoking than other films," and they have the study show the kids start to see this movie since their fourth or fifth grade. The pediatrics professor made a interviewed between 6522 children to see if children who had the greatest exposure to smoking in movies were more than two and a half times as likely to start smoking as these who had the lowest exposure. Dr. Sargent think the study result about the youngest adolescents but may have some children start to smoke before their saw these movies. Balakar also states this is a very seriously problem on those movies and we have to notice it.

    As Dr. Sargent said that "The strength of the findings, and the fact that they replicate almost exactly an earlier regional study, suggest that this association should be taken very seriously." I total agree with him because when we are ages from 10 - 14, we can't tell what is exactly right or wrong. We just follow our eyes when we see someone that they so things and no one say their wrong. In our mind, We think that was right and we will follow the things they did. For example, I think everyone has seen the magic show so far and no matter where you saw it during or after the show always have some notices to mention you that they are professional and you don't follow or replicate what they do with yourself, it is dangerous because some magic show are unbelievable. Even though their mention you, some kid would follow what they said. Many year ago, I saw the news from the newspaper. It said about the boy fell from the third floor and died. He imaged that he can fly if he jump from the third floor. Unfortunately,  he can't fly and his died. He believes he can make it. His parents very sad when they got home after work. They can't believe their child follow the magic show their saw together last night.

    As a result, I think those problem are very seriously to the youngest adoleseents. We all have to do some things to protect our younger kids, Such as, make a rule like youngest kids can't see those dangerous shows or movies to let them grown up in the health environment.

    Tuesday, April 17, 2012

    Blog 9

    1. Does Knowledge Make You Happier?
    Cornell and Malcolmson’s article states that Neo's overall experience in The Matrix film is an educational process similar to the release of the prisoner in the “Allegory of the Cave.”

    Consider both the positive and the negative aspects of education as expressed in The Matrix and “The Allegory of the Cave” and compare them to your experience of education and the educational system. What are the benefits and the joys of learning and what are the downsides and pains of new knowledge? Is it all worth it? Use examples from the texts, your readings this semester, and personal experience to support your ideas.

                 Knowledge make us happier. When you get to know more about the things, you aren't going to to do stupid or dangerous things. Knowledge can make us convenient and avoid things, such as, weather forecast; earthquake forecast and so on. Knowledge can make us happier because some technology can connect people even we far away from each other. That's can make us more closer for each other. 
                 If you are the new yorker same as me, you will know the weather is very changeable in here. If we don't have the knowledge to find the weather report, we must will sick from this weather because we don't know what we need to wear every day. That's the big problem to us everyday before we plan to go out. Nowadays, everyone is busy for their own business even for me. I'm busy at school during the week and busy at work in the weekend. I don't have many time to travel to my country to visit my relates and friends but now we have many social net work can get connect to each other such as telephone and net chat that we can talk face to face though the internet with the computer almost like "in person". I really happy when i see my friends.
                 Knowledge  doesn't easy to gain. you need to pay time on it and you need to practice. Sometimes are very painful during learning. The same situation happened to me, When i first time apply to the school, we have a enter school placement test such as reading , writing skill ,math test. Few days after i got the result, i failed the all english subject test that is mean i can't take regular class to meet my major. First i have to take english class then past all of them. I can take regular class after. I was so sad because i need to pay much more time to concentrate on english first that mean i'll graduated later than other students and lots of money too. I'm still in processing on my english. I worked hard but sometimes even you doing a lot of study you still can't get the result that you expect. I past the reading last semester that i feel happy when i got the result. You will feel sad and doesn't satisfied very much during the process but you learnt something and you got improve after you achieve the point.
                 As a result, I think gain for the knowledge worth it because we can find benefit from it. I think people have a desire that has a strong thirst for knowledge. That's why this desire is the reason that lead us to learn the things and gain the knowledge. Every time you know or learn something new, but you doesn't know before, after that you will feel very happy because you learn something.

    Monday, April 16, 2012

    Blog 8

    1.  I Am/ I Am not Living in The Matrix
    From the beginning of the story, Neo suspects that something is wrong with his world: that he is somehow controlled or manipulated into believing things that are not true. This feeling that “something is not quite right with the world” resonated with many viewers who agreed that we could be living in The Matrix and not know it. What do you think: are we living in a fake world like The Matrix? How do you know? Explain your argument using evidence from your life and/or the film.

             I am not living in the Matrix. As explains in the movie, "that he is somehow controlled or manipulated into believing things that are not true." However, I don't agree with it. Because i think everything that we did was real. We are living in the reality world. That wasn't everything perfect for me. I can decided whatever i want to do.
             I remember many years ago when i first time watched the matrix. After i watched it that i had many question such as the world we live are real or not. Later on, I found one very interesting thing that can explain this question.Because if you can find infinite that the world you live is real. I have a friend that she bought a apartment want to design her house. She downlode a very simple software that can easy to use such as how the look they can use the software to design the home. They put the carpet, wood floor, anything you can put but the only thing you can't find is a mirror. We can't find answer but I brought the question always with me. I remember  
    physics class the professor told us if we want to see what is unlimited. we can use two mirror and face them together then you will get your answer. After the class, i went to ask my professor the question that i have. Why we can find the mirror in that software? She gave me the answer that computer can't imitate the unlimited things. If they do have mirror that can lead the computer doesn't work anymore.
              As a result, i do the same things let two mirror together, then i find i'm still here. That's why i know i am not living in the Matrix.

    Thursday, April 5, 2012

    Blog 7 - Revision for CAT Practice 1

               In " The Dangers of Reality TV," Timothy Sexton states that the reality television give some young people dangerous information to let them think the competition is is much important the value os image over ability, and education aren't important. Reality TV changes the old belief that competition is the way to success. The author said that on many of these shows the contestants even though they have most qualified condition they often lose. If another contestants have very good image, attractively, but not good ability the person could be won. That the information shows the image is more important than ability the author worried the people get this wrong information will think the education isn't important. The "reality TV" makers want to warn the people to face the society.
                When the author said "probably the single most dangerous message these shows dend is that education is completely unnecessary to fulfill the American dream." I agree with author. I think it is dangerous message to tell the people because I think education very important, I have several reason. First, education means knowledge and we need knowledge to do lots of things in our life. Second, money is important, but it isn't the most important things in our life. We need education, we want to show the ability to create something useful to help others.
                 Ability is much important in our life. Every people are doing the different things everyday to run our life, and we can't live without them. Such as, bus driver, doctor and lawyer and so on. They are educated, and they important and necessary in our life. If you sick and you can't find anyone to help you. The result is very serious and horrible. So we need education.
                 Money are important but it can't buy any skill. Such as if you don't know how to drive a aircraft even you have huge of money you still don't know how to drive it. You have to learn this skill that mean you need education. Education is very important.
                 In conclusion, I still strongly agree with the author. In our life we need educated to improve out life quality that why we have to learn the things because we are not perfect we are all human being we need to discover this world.

    Blog 5


          when I watched "The Truman Show", I saw the whole world in the show looks like the real world; The world of seahaven compared to the real world would seems similar.He has a very nice neighbor,they are always greeting and nice to each others. He has a family, even though some memories are not good. He also has his first love memory when he was in college like most of people. He married with a very pretty woman, even though he didn't love her much. He had a very good friend since they were children. They talked everything because he trust him. He had a very decent job like most of people, his manage also will let him to do this or do that. It all look the same as real world but i have to mention you that is all control by someone. Everything to him that is all fake but the only person is him who didn't know.  
             If  i were him, I were do the same thing that like he does. Leave the seahaven the prefect world that all made by someone. The first reason is I don't like being control under someone. The second is I don't like to live the place that filled all the lie and i'm the only one don't know. Everything looks perfect but still fake. Have you think about the real deal? Such as his wife, they are married but that's not the true love to connect them because she is an actor. She wants to be a famous person not just because she loves him. His buddy to being with him is just because that's the order from the controller set up to watch him. No one is really want to care about him. He can't do the thing he wants to do. For example, He can't choose his love that he want. That was so sad because life is just once and short and never can go back. Everyone should choose their own life style and do whatever they like to do. That's why i will make the same decision as Truman.

    Thursday, March 29, 2012

    Blog 6

    QUESTION 2: Reality or Illusion?
    It's illusion.Everything is made for him. Everything is  fake, such as his wife,she doesn't love him, she just want to become a star because she is a actor. Mayers agrees with me when she notes that "all the actors went through a loop every day. Starting with a man with flowers, a lady on a bike and then a beetle with a messed up fender pass by his home in that order."

     QUESTION 2: Reality or Illusion? 
    As Toby explains in her reason, "Everything that he did was real and unplanned; that makes it a reality. " However, I don't agree with her because truman lived a controlled life since he was a baby. Everything is fake and made for him , such as his wife,she doesn't love him, she just want to become a star because she is a actor.

    Monday, March 26, 2012

    Proof that I have completed the grammar work assigned to me as a result of my first essay


    Commas — Exercise 1

    There is no reason to separate your subject, A, from your verb, confirmed.
    Your score is 85%.
    Questions answered correctly first time: 17/20







    Saturday, March 24, 2012

    Proof that I have completed the grammar work assigned to me as a result of my Diagnostic



    You have now donated 800 grains of rice.
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    Quiz on Subject-Verb Agreement
    [Logo]
    Select one answer from the choices provided after each sentence. The word you choose should fit the blank in the sentence. Don't use the HINT buttons unless you really need them.
    1.  Either the physicians in this hospital or the chief administrator ____ going to have to make a decision.
     is
     are

    You're right! When subjects are connected by or, the subject closer to the verb (which is, in this case, singular) determines the number of the verb.


    2.  ______ my boss or my sisters in the union going to win this grievance?
     Is
     Are

    You're right! Again, the subject closer to the verb (my boss) determines the number of the verb.

    3.  Some of the votes __________ to have been miscounted.
     seem
     seems

    You're right! Some is the subject in this sentence; it is plural because the word votes makes it a countable indefinite pronoun.

    4.  The tornadoes that tear through this county every spring _____ more than just a nuisance.
     are
     is

    You're right! The subject is tornadoes. You were not confused by the words and phrases that came between the subject and its verb.

    5.  Everyone selected to serve on this jury _____ to be willing to give up a lot of time.
     have
     has

    You're right! Everyone! seems to be a plural word, but it is always singular.


    6.  Kara Wolters, together with her teammates, _________ a formidable opponent on the basketball court.
     presents
     present

    You're right! The subject is not compounded by phrases such as along with, together with, and as well as.


    7.  He seems to forget that there __________ things to be done before he can graduate.
     are
     is

    You're right! The subject (things, in this case) comes after the verb in constructions that begin with here or there.


    8.  There _______ to be some people left in that town after yesterday's flood.
     have
     has

    You're right! The subject is people, which is plural, and that determines the verb (not the word there).


    9.  Some of the grain __________ to be contaminated.
     appear
     appears

    You're right! Some is the subject of this sentence and, since it is not really countable (you can't count the grain), it is singular.

    10.  Three-quarters of the students __________ against the tuition hike.
     is
     are

    You're right! Three quarters of the students represents a countable number.

    11.  Three-quarters of the student body __________ against the tuition hike.
     is
     are

    You're right! Three quarters of the student body represents a lump sum, a singular entity.

    12.  A high percentage of the population _________ voting for the new school.
     is
     are

    You're right! "Percentage" is a mathematical proportion, expressing here a singular lump sum.

    13.  A high percentage of the people _________ voting for the new school.
     was
     were

    You're right! "Percentage" is a mathematical proportion, but here it reflects a countable, therefore plural, quantity.

    Results: 13 Correct -- 0 Wrong -- 0 Skipped


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